We left it here
And I continued on with the face – still not happy, you can see the charcoal lines I’ve put on to mark where I want to shadow more. I’m happy with the hair and the light on her right shoulder – and the appearance of the cosmos delighted me …..
Which really started with this bit, just to the right of her
and this bit where water and cosmos meet and there’s even fire ….. which makes me wonder if there might be more yet
Here ’tis – so far. The centre and left have barely been touched……….
Please do share any thoughts or questions – or critiques if you feel so inclined. It’s taking longer than I had originally thought, but it’s also going places I’m quite excited about.
Thanks for coming by today, I’m happy that you did!
‘I’m excited to go on this journey with her, and you!
LikeLike
Well thank you Apple Pie – nothing has happened to her for quite a while. I hope to find the time to return to her soon though 🙂 Hope you are well and safe!
LikeLike
The changes are so awesome, Pauline. I think you have stardust coming into the scene to make this woman a beautiful time traveler! 💫🌌🌠
LikeLike
Oh Robin, I like that thought! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
So glad my emotional words don’t drive you crazy, my dear friend. 😊
LikeLike
I DID miss several somethings!! Kept trying to find you but you were hiding from me! 😦 i love the cosmos on one side and I’m wondering about Alys’ question. Moving forward here.
LikeLike
Oh bless Marlene! You didn’t have a working computer and life was frantic – it’s still in progress……
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love it. I didn’t look ahead and cheat, either. I like the cosmos in corner, a little touch of heaven. Then there’s the fire….a volcano in the ocean, perhaps?
LikeLike
Yes, that’s what I thought when I saw it – now of course it’s moved on…. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the sense of movement–wow!
LikeLike
Great, thanks Luanne. Movement is good!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Especially in this case!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Good stuff, Pauline!
LikeLike
Thank you Cynthia.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I like the serenity on her face, Pauline, and the sprinkles of stardust are beautiful. It’s great fun seeing your painting transform. 🙂
LikeLike
Thanks so much D. and I’m delighted you are enjoying seeing the process 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m projecting something from an upsetting dream for some reason. It must be my uneasy state of mind. I know you’ll lift her out of the dark water and back into the light. She’s beautiful, wistful, ethereal. Love the hair and the soft colors on the left. I love that you share your process and look forward to the next installment.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Not to worry Alys, we aren’t going without light 🙂
LikeLike
(((Pauline)))
LikeLiked by 1 person
I do like the cosmos appearing in and around her. I also like the fuzziness of the beach in the back, the light and the greenery and water there. Love the way you put the cosmos in the banner!!! She’s starwoman (or maybe the new Dr. Who?) 😉
LikeLike
Ha – the new Dr Who! 😀 There’s a movement isn’t there to make it a woman next time…… Um, sadly the beach has just gone …..
LikeLiked by 1 person
The new Dr. Who IS a woman!!! In any event, I’m sad about the beach, but haven’t seen what replaced it, so ….
LikeLike
Oh wow! They did it 🙂 Must go stalk the Dr Who site. Heads upon painting – I seem to be heading into mystical mythological territory….. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Darn that Derrick. He stole my comment! In addition to the movement in the hair, I like the swirling of the cosmos in her dress and the fire and all that it might imply. I’m also intrigued by your comment about being interested to see where the painting goes as though you’re not quite in control. I often find this when I’m writing. I start out with an idea but as I write it moves in a new direction. I used to think this was a lack of skill on my part but now I recognize it as part of the creative process. Which brings me to another thought about your use of words as an underlay to your art – like a good bra under clothes – that you don’t see when the work is finished but its there holding everything together.
LikeLike
There’s not an awful lot of difference between painting and writing as I understand it Susanne – I’ve just had an in-depth discussion with my daughter about this particular work and the fact that I a) had two opposing thoughts in mind of technique and subject I wanted to play with and as a result of that b) tried to control what would appear and as a result of that c) haven’t done either very well and the whole thing has taken much longer to go anywhere at all …… The creative process is completely stymied I think when we start knowing where we intend to end and the entire route in between. I’m never sure where a painting will end when I start it. My best paintings appear when I deliberately subdue any analytical thoughts about what needs to happen next right up until the final phase. (Which doesn’t mean I’m not looking and adjusting as I go along, but I’m letting the colour and incipient form and ‘happy accidents’ guide my next move.) But at the end, I can get as analytical as I like. I guess that’s my version of proofing and editing which you might do as you go along…..?
And ha – yes! Love the bra analogy 🙂 The words keep me on track – I’ve got a theme in mind when I start, I’m painting my world, I don’t do dark and dingy or depressing…. My paintings are always about hope and light and over coming.
Thank you for the opportunity to have this conversation ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
I totally agree with this statement, Pauline: “My best paintings appear when I deliberately subdue any analytical thoughts about what needs to happen next right up until the final phase.” As soon as I try to impose order and logic on a story in early drafts I lose the heat that got me started. And sometimes I don’t even see the “real” story until, like you, I’m close to a final draft.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Exactly right! 🙂 It’s an amazing process isn’t it!
LikeLike
I love the cosmos look you’ve achieved and the softness of the hair. You’ll get there with the face.
LikeLike
Glad to have your confidence in me here Laura, thank you 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Loving the cosmos and the fire. The lady is lovely, but I’m missing the ghostliness. But I’m sure once you’ve worked on the left and the centre all will fall into place xx
LikeLike
Of course you are right, and the painting itself is still developing – anything is still possible 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
So etherial, something other worldy about her.
LikeLike
Glad you can still see that aspect Nana C, I need to get her finished and stop fiddling 🙂
LikeLike
I love how you share this whole journey. The colour on the bit to the right is stunning. Can’t wait for the next bit. No pressure or anything!!!! x
LikeLike
It’s changing Shey – a bit like a character that suddenly takes it’s own head and charges off in a totally unexpected direction…..
LikeLike
With the solar eclipse coming up, I thought it looked like she was trying not to look directly into the sun. It’s kind of like clouds, we all see something different. Nice progress.
LikeLike
Yes, we do so often see something different Karen, you are so right! We won’t see the eclipse here, it will be our night time so while that really isn’t on my radar, it is on yours and is therefore totally appropriate. I’ve only experienced one total sun eclipse in my life and it was so memorable I can still remember every moment of it despite the fact it happened over 40 years ago 🙂
LikeLike
This is lovely, Pauline. I like where it is going too – or is that where it’s coming from? Out of the cosmos, a journey. Still looking to the future – hopeful!
LikeLike
Yes! Keep holding those thoughts Norah – I hope you are on the right track 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Double hope!
LikeLike
She’s lovely. And I love the cosmos with the bit of fire. As Eternal Traveller commented, very mystical. 🙂
LikeLike
I’m loving the cosmos too Robin – I think we might have more cosmos and less woman – and possibly more fire…..
LikeLike
It looks beautiful, Pauline. Fantastic job on the hair!
LikeLike
The hair is great this time isn’t it Jill 🙂 Very pleased!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I like how she is looking now. Very mystical.
LikeLike
Mystical is good Carol, I think she is about to disappear a little – or a lot ……
LikeLiked by 1 person
Whaaat?? You just got her looking good. I’m intrigued.
LikeLike
Well, I just tried to disappear her – but she refused to go – so I don’t know what will happen yet 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice movement in the hair; I’m pleased the chin shadow is toned down
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ha, yes, that was disturbing wasn’t it – the thought I might leave it like that ….. 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person